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It could just be me..
I could be selfish in every way..
But deep inside I want love
Maybe that's too much to say..

Can I be honest for once?
Would you care to see what's on my mind?
I long for the warm feelings..
After being so cold, I felt left behind

I spent many hours in darkness
And was trapped inside my head
I changed my tune and gained a voice
Now the tough exteriors left to shed

For I feel the warmth I once forgot
Last on the breath of lovers words
Yet i feel that I'm forgotten now
No ear to have me heard...

I could be greedy in wanting more
Or should my lonely heart be justified?
To be forsaken by loves touch
And play the rules set and abide?

I feel the urge in my hand
To grasp another and feel at peace
In hope you'll be my sanctuary
In hope my pain will cease

Maybe I'm sick deep inside
So in time I must get well
Until then I'll mourn with tears
There with time will only tell..
So I just finished watching Fruits Basket and I felt sad... It had a happy ending and I was glad. But a part of me was reminded of my loneliness.. I don't feel quite as sad anymore.. Yet I feel lonely to a lovers touch. So I felt like writing this.

Please forgive me. I haven't written anything in so long.. sorry if it sucks.. but this is me venting.. Hope you enjoy..
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:iconjaylayson:
Jaylayson Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
This is incredible.
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:iconpandasrampage:
PandasRampage Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you. I haven't read my work in forever and this poem wasn't absolute shit. That's a first.
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:iconjaylayson:
Jaylayson Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011
No, it's not
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Newvintagecity Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
I feel crazy lonely to the lovers touch, but in a way it's a good thing for me now!

I hope you have some luck with love... wait I don't think that you will ever need luck, you'll have it in your hands sometime soon!
XD
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:iconpandasrampage:
PandasRampage Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Lol! Well I hope I do at least. But thank you for the comment. :)
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:iconnewvintagecity:
Newvintagecity Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2010
Your welcome
Oh I know you will!
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GraffitiGirl2216 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010
I love this so much
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PandasRampage Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
thank you ^^
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GraffitiGirl2216 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010
welcome!
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TheSqueakyPenguin Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2010
I'll give you a fave anyway hon lol

This is a really beautiful piece. :heart:
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